Sins and Secrets - Comments

aw man :(

aw man :(

OMG!!! I'M ONLY A QUARTER OF THE WAY THROUGH CHAPTER THIRTY BUT I KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN BECAUSE HE MADE HER THE POTION AHHHH!!!

He’d never been a looker, just a good fuck, and now she had Draco, who was both a looker and a very very good fuck. LOL

In 23, I really don't see why Sateen didn't use the Cruciatus curse on Pansy instead.

"The two Malfoy men". A beautiful line, and so very delectable.

It would be very interesting to see something in Draco's point of view- he isn't the one with more volatile emotions, but I'll certainly bet that he has a lot of them.

It would be very interesting to see something in Draco's point of view- he isn't the one with more volatile emotions, but I'll certainly bet that he has a lot of them.

18- Very clever, turning Erised to Evol. Obvious to me but I doubt to many others

“I’m sure you know as well as I do that every wall has ears, even the ones in our own homes.” 15- Okay, this is getting creepy. I KNOW I've read this line somewhere before, and I haven't read any of your other stories. Do you have another account on Mibba?

Haha, the cat's meow. That's hilarious- never heard that one before

In chapter 6, “I warn you, choose your answer carefully, because if you are lying, I will find out, and I will make you pay.” is really familiar. Did you borrow the line from somewhere? The wrist movements too. I feel like I just read it somewhere and it's giving me deja vu

I just read this whole story in one sitting. I am now moving onto the sequal!

:o Slightly hot, sweet make out scene. Take him, De Fleur! TAKE! HIM! >:D *decided to write out comment as I read each chapter*

I love Voldemort and everything, but he just hurt Sateen's man. Nu-uh! He did not just go there. *gets all blackish and does the head movement gangster chicks do* Tell him girl. That's right. xD

Hehe. Noir's babying Draco. How cute, though, Amycus, not so much. He's an ass. Telling Voldemort about Sateen loving Draco more than she should? Pfft. Little bitch. He deserves to die, and ha!!! He deserved Snape's infamous curse! If I were Sateen, I'd have done that curse several times over, and laughed manically while doing so. I don't believe this makes her or me evil. . . Just a little dark. Muahahahaha!

Yes! Finally the secrets are revealed! The Mirror of Evol's purpose is pretty cool, but cheesy. So, it's cheesy cool. :] And that does make sense. The whole Voldy being close to Sateen and all, though a little off character for Voldy himself, but, it could happen due to the his neglectfulness as a child. Happens with all psychopaths. c:

Yay. Cheers for her and Draco being Head Students/Prefects! Though, I highly dislike Amycus being a damn teacher. bastard needs to die already. <.< Just saying. And Sateens' sisterly bond with Alecto is nice. I like how they get along so well, and they giggle. About killing people. HOW awesome is that? >:3

Oh. And poor Nevile(sp?). . . Poor, non-chubby bastard. *shakes head* He didn't deserve that. Sort of. >:p

o.o Mr. Zibini! Bad, bad little boy for spreading such a 'nasty' rumor. :D Though, it will eventually happen. You can not deny it Draco Malfoy! Bwahahahahahahah!!!

Ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod!!!!!!!! He attacked Draco!!! *squeals from shock* Sateen's getting up. Ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod!!!! What's gonna happen?!??!?! <.< Maybe I should stop typing and read the rest first. . . <.> Yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes!!! She did it! Well, Amycus isn't dead. Yet. But he is brutally hurt. So, yesyesyesyesyesyesyes!!!! Take that! *moon walks back wards, fist pumping the air in joy* More training for Draco. Not interesting, but ohlala. She's pressed against him, and on 'top'. xD xD xD xD

Ooooooh. Sateen just called Lily a mudblood. To Snape's face. o.o Damn. Chick has balls! :3 And that is why I like her so much. Now, she's calling Snape out. How. . . Delicious. Wait. What, what, what?! What this potion? What's this with her future? *yanks on hair* Just when I thought I knew everything, and you go and put more surprises in my face!!! Well, actually it was already all written, but, you know what I mean! :o She found Blaise. . . Run boy who has the same last name like that other dark skinned boy from Holes has! Run! She's going to eat your soul for Christ sakes man! O.O Professor. . . Alecto? NO! BUT WHY?!! They were supposed to be so tight!!!! *shrugs, calming down* Sucks for her, now, doesn't it? Hahahahahahahaha!!!

So, Alecto was assaulted, and Sateen and Draco got another juicy kiss in! Yes! But. . . So sad that she and him can't really be together. *pouts* I have feeling she's going to be killed off, but, there is a sequel, so, I guessing she was saved? O.o I dunno. Anywholah! I quite enjoyed Detention with Severus Snape. H.i.l.a.r.i.o.u.s.!!!!

HOW MANY CHAPTERS ARE LEFT!!!?!?!?!??! ALMOST THERE!!!

Flesh necklaces. . . The title just makes me cringe. :D . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . A bed? Rose petals? Draco? All alone? Kissing? *squeals in delight and goes all fan girlish on you* It is completely fine that you did not do a 'complete' smut scene. Absolutely fine. Why? Because I get to guess and imagine how it went. :} Though, the "Flesh Necklaces", were indeed, weird. xD

:O Two more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! About to read the ending! Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!

*runs all over the place* I. . . I can't believe this! The ending. . . Oh my divines. . . *faints*

Okay. I have not even gotten to the end, or possibly, the best part of this story: S&S, but I feel I NEED to comment, NOW!! Of course there will be a comment for the ending of the story, but it will not be as long as I said it would be, due to the overwhelming fact that my mind is bashing me to death-mentally-to comment. :D Heh.

Anywho, first off, it's clear as day that De Fleur was evil to begin with. Most of the beautiful chicks, especially ones who say, "I've a mission to do." or along the lines, are evil. That wasn't so much as a surprise to me. Though, her being a Death Eater, kind of was. I mean, yeah, she's evil, she's awesome, and hot, and OF COURSE, ever so slowly falling for Draco-hunky-Malfoy, but not all evil people are Death Eaters. :] But I really like that she is. Because then, I get some of Voldemort. *shiftyeyes and coughisafanofvoldycough* Moving on. . . <.<

Second, I like how Draco was so easily fooled by Mistress Noir as she is so formally addressed as, and how Severus is scared of her. >:3 for that. xD I like the new characters too. Alecto and her brother. Well, no so much her brother. I hope he dies!!! Please tell me he does! No... Don't. I can just read it. <.>

I can't wait till I read how, and if, which I am pretty sure he will, Draco falls for Sateen. So many sexy times. LOL. Oh. I love how Voldemort has a squiggly red line under it, but Sateen doesn't. Screw you spell check. Screw. You.

On a side note, that damn mirror and why Voldemort is so close to Sateen is getting at me!!! I MUST KNOW!!!!!!! *takes you by your shoulders and swings you back and fro frantically* >.< Just now starting chapter 20, by the way. Finished the first Snape one, and will shortly comment on that, by the way.

<3 for your amazing writing skills, Sateen's awesome, kiss ass attitude, evil side, and fabulous clothing selection! All she needs is a hardcore Harley. :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D \m/>.<\m/

I am going to finish reading S&S, add my last comment to it, and Snapes' story. *nods* I hope this comment was fairly appropriate.

Oh. The. Divines! One of the best Draco stories on here!!! He's my second favorite in the Harry Potter series! :3 I love your work! About to read chapter 12 as I search for a Voldemort story!!!! >:3 Will comment once more when I finish, and start on Curses and Confessions, devouring the contents with my eyes!!!!

o.O She's alive?!?!?!
This was so..........I'm just so glad I was bored enough to go look for the stories last night after you told me, and when I saw it was a Malfoy story, I literally screamed, and my mom was looking at me like "o_O"
Well I loved it and I'm moving on to the sequel now! <3

Ps. I knew I recognized your username from somewhhwere, but then it was confirmed when you 'demanded' that your reader read Detention With Severus Snape. I read it too and I remember your name form the comments =)

Opps
I wrote that twice

I love it. You spelled Quidditch wrong though. You spelled it Quittage. That was just so you could fix it. I still love the plot.
Arctic

I love it, but you spelled Quidditch wrong. (You spelled it Quittage) That was just so you could fix it. I love the plot though.
Arctic