The Art of Subconscious Illusion - Comments

love how cali is evil in the end she should kill jen love this story

Cali, that's bullshit what you did to Jen. Even though she gets on your nerves. Jimmy I want to kick you in the nuts. Lol update

Damn, I'd LOVE to punch Cali in the face. Over and over and over. That bitch. Awesome story so far. :) I hope she goes easy on Jen. Setting her up to be raped is horrible. I hope the guys find out soon and go apeshit.

*one pair of panties later*

So, you've got to pick this up when you find time because I'm addicted to it now lol. Is it bad that I feel bad for Jen but then again really don't? I think it's bad, haha. But I have to say the whole Cali/Jimmy/Matt/Brian thing pleases me greatly lol.

So pick this up when you get the chance! XD

This story is just amazing. Cali is such an evil girl. It's like she's just gone off the deep end or something lol. I hope you update soon! <33

Love this story even though its twisted although really do feel sorry for jen as she didnt do much at all for the treatment especially rape! Update soon! ! :-)

Holy mother fucking shit! Cali!
Evil girl, I fucking love her. Jimmy and Brian should fuck already because It'll make Cali happy me thinks lol.

Congrats.

Oh god. I love it.

- Johelle

Such sinfully twisted humor. I love it. Please I really hope you update this one soon!!! As much as Jen seems to be the reason, or the fuel I should say, of Cali's hatred and vicious dark side. I honestly think she's gone a little over the deep end, but it works for the story so keep at it!!!

Heheh....i thought having cali almost killing Jen was a bit mean but the whole story is AMAZING!!! I felt bad for brian cuz he doesnt know that his girlfriend was raped and beaten...so if you have more of the story plez update!!

I love this story and its rare when I am anything but indifferent towards a character; however, I hate Cali so much. And I am not sure if that's what you were trying to make us feel, but I absolutely hate her. Kind of want her to get stabbed and die a vicious death.

i agree with MusicMadeness about the lack of comments!!!
crappy stories with bad grammer and spelling get more comments than this!
i F***ing LOVE this!!!!!!

Where the hell are all the comments?! >:|

Damn.
This is so fucking twisted.
It's so good though.

Please update soon!