Impossible Because Of You - Comments

  • porcelain dreams.

    porcelain dreams. (100)

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    Hahaha, well, I like to just put up the situation and the reader gets theirself what happens next (: I wouldn't ruin it at all. And well, that was the point of writing, 'cause that's the way I am around guys that "try" to flirt. That's why I like this story a lot, anyways, he was going to break up with his girlfriend, pr whatever. Thanks a lot :)
    December 13th, 2010 at 02:43pm
  • fascination.

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    I really like this layout and banner, it's very cute :)

    He has a girlfriend, yet he goes and flirts with other girls all over the school? Well, at least this one is nice, and doesn't care about stuff like that. Hmm, they're going to go to the garden.. hmmm. She totally likes him, she was just too stubborn to admit it until now. This was a cute story :). But, it seems like it'll just be a short romance, since he has a girlfriend :/. I really do like your writing though, good job :).
    December 13th, 2010 at 12:08pm