Masquerade - Comments

Nothing particularly good or bad to say. She's pretty apathetic and not into the action. And you like to tailor movie scenes to suit your taste.

Layout [6/10]
Link [0/10]
Summary [10/10]

The layout was original, which I liked. I didn't, however, like the plainness of it.The box around the text area seemed a bit awkward & unneeded. You needed a link to my contest in your summary somewhere, & there wasn't one. Even a little 'x' would have sufficed. The summary was perfect.

As for the content, it was good length and very interesting. I haven't really seen many Tyler Lockwood stories, so that was a nice change. I only found a few problems, and they were very minor. When it started, I was very curious as to who the narrator was. She seems like an interesting character. What bothered me was how you used details to make the story flow, but there were certain things that you could use to turn this into a whole story. That would be pretty awesome. I thought the part where Tyler was starting to shift and the girl was calming him down was really cute. Keep up the good work, & check back in a week or so to see the contest results.

Xxoo.

This is definetly my favorite from all the ones I read. I loved that scene in particular because I love Tyler and I still love werewolves though rarely can i find a good werewolf story that isn't so repetitive talking about the call of the moon or the feel of the fur emerging from someone's back. But anyway. I like this, it was short and sweet, to the point in a way. It was pleasant, romantic, and of course played in the best friend story plot. Can't wait to see what happens next full moon. :P

I enjoyed this story very much so. Not only am I a huge Vampire Diaries fan, but also a big werewolf fan. They're, like, the shit. I think you wrote this excellently! Amazing job.

Really good, especially because I am a Tyler fan, myself. Congratulations on winning second place, you did a fantastic job. I also like how you added someone knew to The Vampire Diaries, which makes it even more interesting. Well done.

I really enjoyed this. I loved how you brought a new character in, it added new flavour to it :)
I'm a huge Tyler fan, and I think you wrote for him pretty well :D
Well done with the quote as well, good luck with the contest!
Overall great entry :)

I would just like to start off that I love the banner on the story page. I reckon it looks pretty awesome.
I love that twist at the end about Willow. That was pretty unexpected, which is good. Also that same scene was wonderful, I loved it.
Also, I loved how you incorporated the quote into the one-shot. It flowed nicely.
Great work on your entry :)