Hm, I don't know which character I like more x] Is Micah's name pronounced 'mee-cuh' or 'my-cah' cause I've met people with the name and some of them pronounce it differently :\
I think this is going to be a wonderful story. I applaud you on your POVs. Each different POV chapter has a different feel to it, one that really fits the character. Most writers have trouble with this, making the feel of their chapters different according to the character it's in, but you've done a great job! *subscribes*
...Satan in disguise. this should be interesting, or deeply disturbing. thank god i'm not religious <3 but really, i'm looking forward to reading this.
I really like this so far XD update soon? I do have a question about the character page though... for Lachlan it said he was dating Lachlan. um is it supposed to say he's dating himself?