Corrupt Me - Comments

yessssssss

pity their first time was when they were drunk :/

James, you beautiful caring manta ray. <3 Love it, homie. Keep it up!

I want a James

I'm so glad Micah has a supportive friend! I was holding my breath through that whole ordeal and having flashbacks to my own coming out to my religious best friend. I'm glad his went as good as mine did! Please update soon, this story is so good!

Awww Jaaaammmesss

I think Angel and Micah are gonna do it soon! not next chapter but either the one after that or the one after that- no later. love thiiiis, I've missed it! update again soon :)))

Oh! I'm also very impressed with how the tone of the chapters shift with the narrator changes. It really adds to the character development to see how Micah explains things versus Angel.

Okay, first of all, I'm jealous as fuck that you met SWS and the pictures look dope. Also, shit homie, that last chapter was super hot. I love how Angel looks after Micah. <3 Too damn cute. 10/10.

Please post another update soon! I just found this story and am so in love with it I stayed up till 6 in the morning reading it!

I really do enjoy this! they're so good for each other. i sense drama in the near future though, things are going too good

I fucking love this story. Every time I see a new chapter pop up, it feels like seeing an old friend again. Micah and Angel's relationship is so adorable and I love the dynamic of Angel helping Micah try new things and being there for him during it, like you did with the party scene. It's weirdly adorable.
I like the involvement of Micah's sisters too, and would love to get a better sense of them as individuals.
Also, side note, which band did we meet??

I've got so many things swimming through my head right now.

I really want Micah and Angel to get into a fight. I don't really know why, I think it's because I'm just angsty as all hell, but I think it would be pretty bomb. Like I felt Micah was too forgiving when he found out Angel told his friends. I dunno, I just woke up so I'm rambling.

I really wanna learn more about Micah's sisters. I feel like they're important to him so more interactions between them may liven the plot up even more. I'd love it if eventually he goes on a double date with Angel and one of his sisters. I think that would be interesting. Haha.

Anyway, I'm gonna go eat now. Thanks for updating!

one word: yes.

double post. oops.

I've been following this story for a while, just silently reading in my down time or whatever. I really enjoy the idea of it, I just kind of wish it would progress a little faster.

All the same, you've created really great characters that are very deep and profound. I feel like Micah might be just a little too innocent, but the build-up to this party and everything has been nice.

I'd really like to see him just hash it out with his mom, and be like "yo bitch I'm gay as hell". I feel like this story might be a little predictable, but I think you're doing a decent job - it's a hell of a lot longer than any story I've ever written and I give you props for that.

Other than a few grammatical errors and awkward sentences here and there, it's well structured and easily read and that's also really important to me. I've already subbed and rec'd a while back but I just wanted to let you know that I'm still reading and still enjoying.

i honestly do not like how this story is written , yet i keep reading just to see if it will get better.... i may give up soon.

It was good to get a background of Angel!