I am in love with this story and you write beautifully. There are too few Alex and Atreyu stories on the net so keep up the amazing work. I'm rooting for Alex and Leese all the way, I hope they make it through.
Great update! I don't know why, but I find your writing style rather poetic. I don't know why. Perhaps I'm mad. Either way, I love it. I hope he gets through it.
can i just say that chapter was adorable? Awww..... I dont get to comment much (usually have a quick read during nap time for my bubba) but I do read :)
She has to tell Alex how she feels. She can't hide it forever. D: I seriously thought Alex was going to tell her he loved her when he saved her from that guy that spiked her drink. But alas, he didn't. </3 Great job!
Brandon, although as lovable he is, must stop hogging Alex. OTHER PEOPLE NEED HIM TOO. More than he does, might I add. You did a good job at setting up the dilemma about Lesse (I hope I got that right. XP) loving Alex and not being sure if he felt the same way.
There's no comments yet?! That is a shame. >:/ I'm loving this story so far especially since it's one of the few Alex stories on here. Lord knows he needs more stories about him written on here. Even though it's just the beginning, you're doing a great job at setting up Alex and his friend and their relationship. Keep up the good work!
A lot of this hits close to home. Alcoholism runs in my family. :/