The Right Girl - Comments

this was just...... amazing is rly an understatement but that's all that comes ot my mind
i loved the way you encorporated right girl in it
i also just like fell in love wiht john and he wasnt being a player and was with ashton
this was amazing all in all and i really hope you continue on righting even more amazing stories! : )

aw this was so cute! I'm so happy John finally said I love you to Ashton! fhgioregba yayayay!

omg!!!!!!!!!! i cant believe theres only one chapter left please update soon!!!!!! <3333

Okay, so she did settle but now they're not together! WOOOO!!! John and Ashton have to talk now, it could/should lead to them getting back together! ibgawihgnirueolkNGAREWISLKMF PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!

gbrwiuaolfhveruoi Ashton better not settle for this Sam dude! John and she need to be together and everybody knows it! Ashton's mom needs to learn that she can't control her life too, seriously, she's going to college! Aggghhh I just hope John comes soon.

John needs to be smarter with his words! He can't just go around bringing up people's pasts, they're in the past for a reason! I just hope Ashton can forgive him and that he can forgive himself too. Everything was going so well!

I hope nothing bad happened! Everything's just so great,I love it! I can't wait for the next!

I hope that nothing bad just happened! It's great that everything is going well with John and Ashton. Now I'm just wondering what happened to her!

Aw, yay! Things are good again! me likes

Amazing chapter!! Can't wait to read the next one!! :)

YAY! THEY'RE PATCHING THINGS UP! =)

Amazing!! Seriously. I wish my John story was as good as yours

loved the last chapter, and i can't wait for more. (:

I love it so far. Cant wait for more!

No comments? That's odd.
I found this story very interesting, i can't wait to see what happens next.