A Rivalry with Aim. - Comments

Thought the story was cute =]

But more than anything I loved the layout and how it fit so well. Excellent job.

I really liked this [:
I like how she had the interior motive of only being his rival to make him a better guitarist.

Loved it! Short but sweet - and I loved the style of writing. It flowed really nicely from the page, and I loved the plot too (:
Well done for getting it out so quickly as well! I really enjoyed reading it, thanks for entering!