November 27th, 2010 at 10:48pm
This was just...wow.
I enjoyed reading it, and I haven't read something actually WORTH reading in quite a while.
The metaphors you used were perfect.
The whole piece was absolutely flawless.
It was beautiful, and real, and I totally loved it. [:
The metaphors used in this completely blew me away! You put a new twist on so many things, it's brilliant.
Instantly I loved the line Drinking in all your old letters like late-night doses of alcohol. I love the similie in this sentence, it always shows the addiction the person is experiencing.
You've got an amazing talent, if I were to list everything I loved about this I'd just end up retelling your story.
Excellent job!
Oh and I love the layout >.<