Falling for Eternity - Comments

I love this story. Damon is too fine <3

Another lovely chapter. :D
I am DYING for the next!

<3

WHOA. You totally didn't have to mention me, shucks, now I'm blushin' C: awesome chapter, as always. And the way you make Damon act is incredible and weirdly accurate.. In a good way, obviously. Loveyou, Broseph.<3

Oh my goodness.
Definitley subscribing.
DAMON. <3 <3 <3
SEXY.

love it :D

You're an amazing writer :] And I love what Elena said "Dont fall for him", because that's exactly something Elena would say on vampire diaries ;D You're characters seem original and real while staying true to the what the characters are like on the show.

Interesting. Very interesting. Keep it up!

I really like it. Can't wait for Damon to come into the story. And I agree with Vampiresloveme ^ The way the dialogue was formatted was a little hard to follow. Other than that, it was great. Keep up the good work.

I really love the details of this chapter. I like the use of elements and food lmao. The only part that threw me off a little was the dialogue. It's in paragraph form and it's simply harder to follow who is saying what. I'm looking forward to seeing how school goes in Mystic Falls!!! Keep up the great work! I'm proud to be your first subscriber = D - Cassie