That was really cute. I hope you update again, I like the plot. The small stories with in the stories don't really pan out much though and it's really bouncy. Try more description and this would be wonderful!
saw this on your story page and decided to give it a go =) and I'm glad I did, this story is totally awesome so far. I know it says working on it, so I'm guessing it will be ahwile between updates.. but this story is too good to pass up, so I'm subscribing ^.^