Ok... now that I've gotten my geeky fangirlness out of the way....
I love this a lot, like, a lot a lot. You write a young Dumbledore very nicely. He's smart, but still young. You can tell he'd rather be out in the world, searching for the Hallows and such. And you don't write Grindelwald as a complete villian. There's anger, but not evil. It's nice, refreshing.
Ok... now that I've gotten my geeky fangirlness out of the way....
I love this a lot, like, a lot a lot. You write a young Dumbledore very nicely. He's smart, but still young. You can tell he'd rather be out in the world, searching for the Hallows and such.
And you don't write Grindelwald as a complete villian. There's anger, but not evil. It's nice, refreshing.
Cannot wait to see where you go with this :)