Victims - Comments

Loved it. :)

The ending though--made me feel like there should--or would be more (or just makes me wonder if Brian actually did die, or if he'll end up in the hospital). The thing I'm wondering, did Jimmy and the rest of the guys get to him in time (again)--so they could save him? or did he actually die this time?

i swear this made me cry
i thought about Jimmy the whole time =(

it really is beautifully written i really liked it =)