The Solution Isn't Always That Simple - Comments

  • a7x.Sick.Puppie.x

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    Finally!
    You took your time Missy!
    I'm hoping you get the next one up pretty soon now... Or else mwhahaha
    Great update
    You built it all up well Nd I liked how you did all the flashbacks and everything :P
    May 9th, 2011 at 07:39am
  • Moosey

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    I didn't even know what story this was when I got the e-mail saying that it updayed :P
    Hehe, though I suppose I can't really talk can I?
    Nice update, you should do it more regularly :L
    Moar soon plz :3
    January 22nd, 2011 at 03:16pm
  • a7x.Sick.Puppie.x

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    Yeyeyeyeyey you finally updated xD
    Loved the chatper but me no liky what i think their plans involve for her
    Dun dun dun hehe
    No chance of escape NOO!!! Hahaha they will get out... Eventually
    can't wait for more :)
    January 22nd, 2011 at 11:11am
  • x.MrsAlexGaskarth.x

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    Yay! Updates :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
    Me is liking the kidnapping thing.
    Maybe summat like random happens that we wouldnt have guessed or summat
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY :)))
    November 12th, 2010 at 08:09pm
  • a7x.Sick.Puppie.x

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    LOVED THAT!
    I don't know why but i didn't think the kidnapping thing would be able to sound so good but it did.
    Lol, i couldn't stop reading!
    Hmmm, i want to know why they them too? I mean you wouldn't just take random people if you needed som,one to make him speak
    Maybe there's moer to Danny than we know...I wonder

    OMG HAPPY BIRTHDAY! lol

    Can't wait for more of this, somehow i actually think that there will be

    You can do it Ms Pineapple! Woooooooo
    November 12th, 2010 at 08:23am
  • Moosey

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    Liking the new chapter, and you got a good amount of subs already ^_^
    I would change the colouring scheme though, me no think they go ;P
    I know you'll want brown so perhaps brown and blue? They go together on the colour spectrum... kinf of XP
    Also how about changing the font and size, it makes the chapter look longer ;D
    I hope you know where you're going with this one, I want to see more and I expect good things from you :)

    Moar soon plz :3
    November 11th, 2010 at 10:16pm
  • a7x.Sick.Puppie.x

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    There will be a story because if there isn't i will eat you mwhahahhahhaa
    Intreseting so far, i'd say i want to know what happens next but i already know xD
    Best thing to do swede, is to write down any ideas you have, even if they seem irrelevant and then use them later or try to make them fit into the story :)
    ...You can't go wrong with murder!!!! mwhahahhahahhahahahaha

    Oh, and i randomly thought of something. Maybe the 4 of us, i'm hoping it's easy to guess the four i'm on about, could like write something together, doesn't have to be long or anything and we could take turns, but if one of us can't write we could do it for them :)

    Random ideas are taking over my mind!!!!!!!

    Ha, katie thought it was two guys, I knew it was a girl and a guy, don't worry.

    I want to find out more about them now!! By now i do mean now! So read this comment and get thinking...If you want. Oh, wait, its probably best that you don't write isn't it.

    Open that science book and revise missy!

    If it is Wednesday and you're reading this then i'm very dissapointed...I should be revising too though...ahhh well. I did a bit :)

    I only have 2 pages and some questions left XD

    Hmmm...apples

    Can't wait for you to update again...Which YOU WILL DO! hehehe
    November 10th, 2010 at 06:23pm
  • x.MrsAlexGaskarth.x

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    OK... kinda wierd opening
    but anyways
    Good story
    I hope there actually is one thius time
    More soon hopefully :)
    November 9th, 2010 at 07:36pm
  • Pineapplemoo

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    I will I tryed to do a story that I can really explore and make my own proper book!
    November 8th, 2010 at 10:13pm
  • Moosey

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    Great opening again Rach! ^_^
    Lets just hope you actually carry one with this one ;P
    I'm liking it and I would say you'd added a veru sufficient amount of detail in abyway. I hope you have a plan for this one hun, if not then you'll get bogged up very ealisy -_-
    *Sub*
    Moar soon plz :3
    November 8th, 2010 at 10:09pm