When Love Is Right Next Door - Comments

foREVer Synyster (100)

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i really like it :)

November 3rd, 2011 at 01:45am

BreeJax (100)

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I love this so far! Two of my favorite things together in one story!

December 12th, 2010 at 07:17pm

sheraba (200)

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Okay. So. I think your plot line actually has direction and is going really well so far. However, I'm thinking you need a beta or a better spell checker than you've got because there are a lot of spelling and grammar errors. Other than that, though, I think you've got a really good direction and I can see this story having a lot of potential. Just check your errors over and you should be good. Good luck =)

December 10th, 2010 at 12:28am

StacieIerogeance (100)

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just watch for spelling and that's about ti but other then that its great

November 12th, 2010 at 12:41am

Poison001x (100)

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Freaking awesome lol. Please write more soon! :)

November 11th, 2010 at 03:14am

Planets.Collide! (100)

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love it so far! cant wait for anotherr!!

:)

♥kk&&gates

November 9th, 2010 at 05:12am