WOW! I'm speechless! I don't think I've ever read something like this before! It was amazing! I loved it! The way it was written! How you developed the story! It was amazing! Congrats! 
October 29th, 2012 at 04:52pm
Wow. That was powerful.
Your Score:
10/10 Originality (Is your storyline original?)
9/10 Correct Grammar/Spelling
8/10 Compatiblity with the song (Does the plotline fit with your song of choice?)
10/10 Appropriateness (Does it follow the rules?)
9/10 Character Development (Do your characters stay the same throughout the story?)
9/10 Flow (Do you use transitions?)
9/10 Format (Does it stay consistant throughout?)
10/10 Layout (Is your font easy to read?)
TOTAL: 74/80
good job!
