June 9th, 2012 at 06:10am
Oh, this is for my contest. :3
I'd like to say how wonderful your banner is. I like how you tied the theme of your drabble into it-- repetition. The entire layout is just beautiful, and very pleasing to the eye.
Your entire story is magnificent. It captures the reader with the first sentence and doesn't let go at all. It's powerful, and moving, and wonderful, from beginning to end. I read it three times because I loved it so much. (= You're an incredibly talented author.
Words appear in the cloud of fumes and they proclaim the truth, the truth that he’s been trying so hard to avoid.
Favorite line.
Thank you for submitting your entry early!
This is written so beautifully, and is so different from what I expected, looking at the picture. Those last two sentences were so simple, and so crushing, that I nearly lost my composure. How brutally soul-crushing.