I very much like this :] I love the relationship between Garrett and Abbi already and I was immediately sucked into this story by the description you gave. Your question asking if this story was good or bad has a definite answer, and that is that this is truly good. I hope you continue writing it. Undoubtedly, I’ll be subscribing :D
This is great.
You're great.
I think awkward just comes along with the name territory. :P
(Cause I'm awkward, too.)
Muahahaha.