The Thin Line - Comments

Still reading..or I guess since it's been so long; rereading!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i have just finished the chapters that you have updated and i like how you put a new character in the mix. also i like his reactions to violets reactions and remarks. the story is unfolding great, and i cant wait to read more! :)

I am! I am! I really like this story, and I really hope you update again soon. This story is really interesting, and I love that you put Mason's POV in.

i really hope that you keep the story. i cant wait for the next update!!! :)

I love it!!!! It is great so you should keep it!!!

Keep it! Love it so far! Can't wait for the next update! subbed (;

Keep it! I do ever so like it. haha.
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keep keep keep! i agree that it's a little confusing, but extremely intriguing. can't wait till the next chapter, i'll definitely be reading!

wow!! i like your story. its a little confusing. um so the mom left and the dad takes care of the violet and her sister, and violet has three friends so far; clay, and the half-sisters. violet takes up a summer job but right before clay makes a move on her and there is a blowup between her sister and one of the half-sisters, liz. then the other half-sister has an asthma attack so violet takes up the summer job. but what are those other scenes. the one where an officer comes to the door and tells her that her mom died in a car accident. is that a flashback or something? how does it connect to the plot? and what is the summer job? srry about all of the questions. i just want to be sure that i am reading your story correctly. i like it. its very interesting and like it raises a lot of questions. :) so if you could update i would like to continue reading. thanks. :) oh and i really like your story, cant wait til the next chapter...