Hospital Care - Comments

thumbs up
all the way xD

Wow. ;D
Why has it ended?? I want to read more. :(

It was amazing!
i wish it didn't have to end :'(

I love it!!!
more pwease??

love c:
more soon?

Awe I don't want it to Endddd :(
Sexy chapter?
And continue it?
Puh-leeze

I'm with SnowxBree I wouldn't mind it at all!
this is such a great story

lol i wouldn't mind 15-20 chapt of smutt ;DD

i loved it <3 :)

love the idea.
but is that mary-jane in the layout?
(marijuana)

I didn't mind at all :) I quite enjoyed the lengthS
U had a few spelling errors, but that's fine :)
Brownie points;
1000 for hotness ;)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! this can not end this,this story is funny as all hell! and i don't want to end. please update soon.

o ho ho ho
kinky ;D
more <3

brownie points -
10 000 000
:D
hahah xD
that's awesome child!
<3 loved it :)

now for the anal part of me -

watch out if ur doing this on ur ipod, or even on ur comp,,
watch out that u don't do this -

"bla bla bla " Sneaking a glance.. bla bla bla
^

there should be something there and u did it a few times where u left out the "I" in it :P xDD but other than that
WEEEEEEEEE <3
UPDATE! :d

yeeeeeeeeeeeee :)
i loved it <3

haha
this i ssexy
keep it up and ill award brownie points <3

xDD

as for the grammer, don't worry about it. it's fine
i have terrible grammar and spelling so i understand ;D

LMAO AWESOME ! Story
Favorite Part
"I'm Dorman by the way. No making fun of it. It means wild animal. And I'm going to pounce on you like a wild lion when I get back."

"The Fuck" LMAO Haha Anyways LOve it

hahahhaha
Dorman, i love that
so original <3
okay
so i
i like the story :)
i like how u made it a hospital thing, but still kinda crazy ahha
okay so
here's the deal --
brownie points for hot kiss on first chapt :D
minus brownie points for no character page/ character pics on summery D:
i wanna kno wht they lok like/their persos!

okay, i loved it, keep updating. an update a day keeps an angry abril away ;D
<3

try working a little on the puncutation, you missed a few ' in your contraptions like 'cant' - can't
kay :)

other than that
GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTT
UPDATEEEEEEEEE :D

FIRST COMMENT!!!
UPDATE SOON PLZ!!