The Sky Under The Sea - Comments

this is so damn increddible.
"And just like that, they faded away, into the sky under the sea. Never to be seen again"
i love it the ended really held well and didnt let down in comparison from the rest of the story <3

For those who don’t know who Vic Fuentes is-because I don’t know- I would suggest putting a bit of background information about him and what he does in the summary. The story flows real nicely. Other than that the story is well written. Good job and keep up the good work.

wow, this was beautiful. It gave me goosebumps all over. Wonderful job!!!!

wow

Oh wow, this was so sad...I loved it! I definitely have a thing for sad stories. Thanks for entering my contest and for my favorite PTV song ever, you did an amazing job. :D

that was so sad, but so beautiful. i loved it. <3

This is depressing but very good. I like it.

sad and sickly sweet