Hello, Can You Please Stop Haunting Me? - Comments

  • second-hand smoke

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    Okay. So I read this chapter on my phone and then wrote an epically long and equally gushing comment and then it refreshed on me and I lost it! AHHHH! o now I'm on my computer....
    ANYWAYS
    I loved this chapter soooo much! I think it's my favourite so far. I would like to marry Zach. Please and thank you. He is so freaking adorable! cshb74gebjhdfgf!!
    When they kissed my heart stopped freaking beating. omg.
    And then the awkward moment after when he fell down the steps and she ran into the door...chjb483grhde!!rhe4g6yh that was so funny! I laughed my ass off and then melted from Zach's cuteness. That scene was so real. Like I could actually imagine that happening to someone.
    NOW to the author's note...
    My heart stopped freaking beating AGAIN.
    Girl, HOW could you do that to me?!?
    April fool's...haha I'M NOT LAUGHING
    I started freaking out omg
    I love this story SO SO SO much and PLEASE continue it or I may die.
    I don't care if updates are slow, it's ALWAYS worth the wait!!
    Okay, so there's my comment.
    I'm gonna go to the hospital now.
    Something must be seriously freaking wrong with my heart.
    haha :)
    April 3rd, 2011 at 03:15am
  • Marionette_

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    Lovely story. Made me tear up at some parts.
    Can't wait to see how things are going to unfold.
    :)
    April 2nd, 2011 at 08:09pm
  • worldclass

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    Hahaha! Why didnt i think of that when I posted yesterday? Lol. Very scary, young lady. Singing dare scare us like that again. It was just getting good, dangit!!!! (Well, it was always good, but, yeah.)
    April 2nd, 2011 at 07:37pm
  • NothinNNomore

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    I say that you keep it going! I love this story.
    April 2nd, 2011 at 07:21pm
  • lil'taquito

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    Jeez! You scared me when you said you were quitting!
    April 2nd, 2011 at 06:10pm
  • pink tape

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    DAMMIT YOU SCARED ME D:
    I think Jeremy is sort of jealous, in that weird way when he's a ghost and has a crush on an alive girl.
    oh well :D<3
    April 2nd, 2011 at 03:47pm
  • second-hand smoke

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    you updated! Yayayaya! I loved it and it was definitely worth the wait! What's the truth? What's her secret?? Dying here!! Zach is so dhujdhhsfh I love him.
    Okay so here's my random prediction of what will happen...
    Eliza tells Zach that she actually had a massive crush on Jeremy when he was alive. Zach has some voodoo powers he uses to make jeremy human temporarily like a few hours. He helps eliza be with jeremy with his powers cos he loves her. Its not enough for eliza so she kills herself to be with jeremy. Zach is so upset he kills himself too and then there's a big ghost love triangle! Haha gosh that was morbid....DO
    Can't wait for the next update!
    April 2nd, 2011 at 07:48am
  • pink tape

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    Zach is so..aww <3
    I bet she tried to kill herself once, maybe that's what she's hiding?
    :D
    March 30th, 2011 at 11:03pm
  • worldclass

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    Yay! I like this update! Haha. Jeremy...you can be jealous, dude, but you're a ghost. So you really don't stand a chance unless you come back to life or this is supposed to be a tragedy. Which I'm hoping it isn't. Meanwhile, aww Zack being all supportive and helpful :)) can't wait for the next update <3
    March 30th, 2011 at 02:52pm
  • musicwolf08

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    I LOVE THIS STORY! Can't wait for the next chap!
    March 22nd, 2011 at 03:56pm
  • writhing

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    The conversation Zach had with his mom made me giggle. :D Zach is so cute, but so is Jeremy.
    I love the newest updates. I'm glad Eliza got to talk to Mia, and I'm glad Mia feels better.
    And also, I'm sensing a tiny bit of jealousy from Jeremy...
    I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
    March 17th, 2011 at 12:39am
  • kissmyoops

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    I love Zach, but Jeremy..is forever my favorite guy in this story :)
    March 16th, 2011 at 08:39pm
  • pink tape

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    Zach. is. adorable.
    I think Jeremy is a little... jealous?
    :D
    March 16th, 2011 at 07:55pm
  • second-hand smoke

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    ZACH.
    sjbciuh4r38ibcdjsb
    I just LOVE him.
    And Jeremy's sarcastic comments made me laugh.
    Why does Jeremy care if Zach likes Eliza or not? I know he can't JUST be 'curious'.
    ...SOMBODY'S JEALOUS!
    haha, please update soon! Love this story :)
    March 16th, 2011 at 07:00am
  • vaindaisy

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    aw, i'm loving the story and Zach seems ubber adorable :)
    i can't wait for the next chapter! :)
    March 16th, 2011 at 03:52am
  • worldclass

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    hahahahaha! I love Zach! lololol. And his mom is just too weird. Interesting how Eliza was like "of course I like him as a friend." Whereas Zach is like "of course I like her" with no back explanation. So is he admitting to having a crush on her? And I love his little "size" conversation with Jeremy hahaha.
    March 16th, 2011 at 03:31am
  • kissmyoops

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    Awhhh(:
    March 15th, 2011 at 09:37pm
  • pink tape

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    awwww <3
    March 15th, 2011 at 09:03pm
  • Flying Solo

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    I loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter, I need to see what happens.
    March 15th, 2011 at 04:56pm
  • PATDROCKS!

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    Awww I love that Eliza was able to make Mia feel better (:
    This is one of my favorite stories. I love it <3
    March 15th, 2011 at 03:17pm