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  • worldclass

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    Love this! At first I had no idea as to where you were going with it but I was eager to find out and now I sort of see a possible path, but I'm not sure. I love how the kiss between Jeremy and Ellie was just a comfort thing, though it does bring up the possibility of them having something going on, which would be a huge problem, I would imagine. Though if he seems so slowly be coming back somehow...hmm... Nah. I dont think thatll happen. Meanwhile, Zach adds an interesting dynamic. I can't to see where this goes :)
    March 15th, 2011 at 08:37am
  • second-hand smoke

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    I just found this story today and spent an hour or so reading all the chapters. I love it all so far. The story idea is so unique and the characters are relatable and authentic. I like Zach. I laughed out loud when he fell asleep in history and then smacked his head on the desk and it woke him up. I really like the dynamic, yet distant, relationship between Eliza and Jeremy and I look forward to seeing how it progresses. The story title caught me - it's great, and your writing style seems to match it, in that it's quite haunting in itself. Your writing style is beautiful and flows effortlessley - it's almost poetic. I enjoyed every minute of this and I'll gladly wait patiently for another update, as I know that it will be just as brilliant as all your others. Keep writing! I've subscribed. By the way, your banner and layout are lovely :)
    - Becca Arrington
    March 15th, 2011 at 07:29am
  • wild thang.

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    I love this story sooo much. You have no freaking idea.

    Like, I'm serious. I seriously wait around my computer for another beastly update. LOL. You have no idea.
    March 11th, 2011 at 03:41am
  • PATDROCKS!

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    Saw this the other day and bookmarked it but didn't get around to reading it until today and now I'm super happy I did. This story is wonderful. I can't wait to read more. :D
    February 26th, 2011 at 04:57pm
  • justeva.

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    i read this at night, and when i went to bed i freaked out thinking some ghost boy will be staring at me (: and i love this so much.
    February 26th, 2011 at 07:45am
  • musicwolf08

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    I love this story!!! Please keep writing!
    February 25th, 2011 at 03:56am
  • lil_angel666

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    i like it! Keep up the good work!!!!
    February 24th, 2011 at 01:01pm
  • pink tape

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    Is Eliza going to tell Amelia that she can see Jeremy?
    Hm, i wonder... :D
    February 23rd, 2011 at 11:34pm
  • pink tape

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    Aw, :D
    February 21st, 2011 at 01:00am
  • Atrocity's Mask

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    awwww so sweet, but probably really awkward. If they were kissing in public with actual people around, it would be weird. xD Lovely update =]
    February 20th, 2011 at 09:58pm
  • kissmyoops

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    AWEEEEEEEE <3
    February 20th, 2011 at 12:54am
  • The Color Wini

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    Love the update.
    Heartbreaking kind of.
    February 18th, 2011 at 10:36am
  • writhing

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    Aww, the last chapter was so sweet. I wonder, is Jeremy, like... physically there now or something? I mean, it seemed like he was when they kissed and everything...
    BLAH, I don't know. I'll just wait and see. (:
    February 18th, 2011 at 04:55am
  • Atrocity's Mask

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    Usually I would have some wacky prediction, but I don't xD
    February 15th, 2011 at 06:45am
  • pink tape

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    Happy Valentines day to you too :D
    February 15th, 2011 at 12:29am
  • slumflower

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    I love this!! And I'm so curious now!! I have NO CLUE what's going to happen D:!
    Please update soon:]
    February 14th, 2011 at 11:48pm
  • EvenSong

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    I have fallen head over heels for your story! I love stories about spirits and interactions between the paranormal (Call me a freak ;))

    Can't wait for the next update!
    February 14th, 2011 at 06:27pm
  • The Color Wini

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    Great update, really great.
    I really can't wait to see what happens next.
    February 14th, 2011 at 03:54pm
  • WtftXDino

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    I love it. ^-^
    February 14th, 2011 at 02:53pm
  • The Color Wini

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    Amazing update.
    Finally, she has someone else to share this huge secret with without being called crazy and deemed insane.
    February 14th, 2011 at 12:55pm
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