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Firstly, the banner is gorgeous and I love the pink shirt he’s wearing <3 Right away I really like the style of your writing; the repetitiveness casts a quite nice and a little emotional effect. Awe, the way you describe Hayden makes me want to leap into this screen and just give him a big ol’ hug! It’s so sad but at the same time referring to tinsel when talking about Alanna was really unique. Overall, that was a simply amazing drabble! It flows wonderfully and I love how much detail got put into it even though it was short. I might have to read more of your work!

One thing I noticed: Alanna died six month later… – It should be Months

Yes, I posted that twice on purpose.(Actually, I didn't. Just coming up with an excuse for my stupidity... But I really do love it that much.)

I really loved this.

I really loved this.

This seriously made me cry.
You are just a wonderful writer, Aliyah.
I'm dead serious. I LOVED IT.