I loved the new chapter as well. Wow, wow, wow. I can't describe, but I think that's the thing; you described something that's undescribable, and that's what makes it so amazing.
Goaty stego and floaty (dont be offended by my laziness with usernames), I love the clarity in which you expressed your chapters how it was easy to see directly where you where coming from with everything. And how you could condense subjects and meanings so big but at the same time be thorough
I loved yours. I can totally relate. I adore my parents and am so thankful for them, and I know they'll be proud of me no matter what. I loved the bit about not caring about material possessions. Very awesome. I loved the whole thing. Great job!
That was really great. While I was reading, I pictured us sitting at a small wooden table in a coffee shop, you telling me about what you love. I think it's great that you were able to make me feel so at ease while I read it, like it was a conversation. Great job!