The Longing - Comments

Ok, Just started reading this (I know, I know... I'm a little behind!!!). I LOVE IT.
I just had to pause for a second to let you know that this is quite possibly the BEST LINE I've ever heard/read: "I know she’s a bitch who needs to be falcon punched off the Seattle Space Needle."

I literally snorted LOLing. Good thing there's no one in my office suite today - Saved me looking like an ass. :) Ok, back to reading now... ;-]

I fucking love this story! It's the best fucking Zacky V story ever! ...No joke!

Still in love with this story and you know it.
<3

Zack is so perfectttt

I’m so excited I could shit rainbows and bleed glitter!

So excited to see who wins (hopefully me ;) )

Amazing Story :D

I Love It...>.<

Oh right..i forgot..
I’m so excited I could shit rainbows and bleed glitter!
~Paige~

For some reason my comment posted twice, sorry about that!

Congratulations on finishing your story! It's always good to finish what you started (Lord knows I have a difficult time trying to do that!) I started keeping up with your story around chapter 4, and I gotta say: you did an awesome job keeping me hooked, although I'm not one for hardcore, kinky sex; it was still an enjoyable story. With that, being said... I will continue to be a loyal reader.

one more thing: I’m so excited I could shit rainbows and bleed glitter! (I've never entered a contest before, so exciting!)

Congratulations on finishing your story! It's always good to finish what you started (Lord knows I have a difficult time trying to do that!) I started keeping up with your story around chapter 4, and I gotta say: you did an awesome job keeping me hooked, although I'm not one for hardcore, kinky sex; it was still an enjoyable story. With that, being said... I will continue to be a loyal reader.

one more thing: I’m so excited I could shit rainbows and bleed glitter! (I've never entered a contest before, so exciting!)

:( it ended....

i almost cried ;') in a good way though! love it.

My sister told me about this chapter before I got a chance to read it!
I wanted to bitch slap her but the fact that she is clear across the other side of the planet made that impossible.
BUT!
the chapter was so awesome that I still laughed my ass off and "awwwed" when I read it!
Cant wait for the next story up!
And to see who won the contest!

Happy tears forming in my eyes right now. :')

ah this was awesome nd adorable i love it :)

naawwww theyll make cute parents!!!

This contest will be for my lovely readers who want to be paired up with EITHER Jimmy ‘The Rev’ Sullivan or Johnny Christ (you can’t choose both!). This story will be written by me and it WILL be NC-17. The rules are listed below. SEND THE INFORMATION TO ME IN A PRIVATE MESSAGE. DO NOT PUT ON MY COMMENTS PAGE ON MY PROFILE OR IN THE COMMENTS OF THE STORY, PLEASE.

1. You obviously must be a member of Mibba.
2. You have to add me to your friends list :)
3. You have to be AT LEAST 18 (eighteen) years of age or older. I can’t do underage sex scenes, obviously.
4. You have to send me the following in a message:
-Your name
-Your Mibba username
-What you want to be called in the story. First, Middle, and Last name.
-A nickname, if any.
-Your age (real age)
-The age you want to be in the story (over 18 please)
-Your physical description - eye color, hair color, height, dress style, etc. you want to have in the story.
-Your background you want your character to have - parents, schooling, friends, anything.
-WHO you want to be paired with.
-WHY you think you’d be a good person to match with them. Make it creative, okay? I don’t want a bunch of “omg like Johnny is soooo hawt and I’m hawt and his biggest fan for realz!”. I’ll click delete.

Tips:
-Be honest.
-Be sincere.
-Be yourself.
-Please, NO CHATSPEAK. It hurts my brain.
-Use proper grammar and spelling. It doesn’t have to be perfect, but I need to be able to understand what you’re trying to say, you know?

The contest will run from tonight, Monday, November 29, 2010 until Monday, December 13, 2010. That’s TWO WEEKS. I won’t take any submissions after 11:59 p.m. EASTERN time on December 13, 2010.

INSANITY, I SAY INSANITY. i cant wait for this i want to be jimmy's lover....keep up the good work.

why are you so good at writting!
my god, this was adorable!

I’m so excited I could shit rainbows and bleed glitter!

Yeah!
Baby Fiction will be coming home!
Now if you excuse me...I have to go read the rest of your stuff even if my twin flipping gave away the ending!
Imma kill her when I get back form China!

Awww this story is sooo cute!!:)

I can't wait till Fiction comes home! <3
I’m so excited I could shit rainbows and bleed glitter!

That was adorable. :')
I'm glad baby Fiction gets to go home soon! <3

And uh....

I’m so excited I could shit rainbows and bleed glitter!