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please please please update? I love this story so much!

I'm lovin' this story!!

um, so I'm in love with this story so much it's insane. Please update soon, seriously, love the plot and where you're going with it. It not some cheesy-predictable story, it's great!

Moreeeeeeeee :)

commenting*
thriller-ish*

Sorry about that. xD
*subscribes*

Thanks for ommenting on my story, so I thought that I would check ours out.
I am only on the first chapter but.... IT IS GREAT SO FAR! :)
I think it is cool to do a thriller-is sort of story, so kudos to you! :)
Well off to read some more.

<3

I subscribed about a week ago, but just read the whole story. Dang that's a lot of action lol.
Update soon! I'm SO glad her dad's okay.

Whoa, holy flip....
And person over me probably hasn't properly read the story if she can't remember Kevin >:3
So, Kevin is Alex half-brother? Hm, interesting....
Beatrice probably wants to take atvantage of his abilities or something
And it now makes perfect sense why she wanted to kill Jack
But now there's another question, why she was after Alex....
I really can't wait to see what's going to happen next
Hope you update soon :)

Love Love Love it but where did Kevin come in thats where Im confused cuz I dont remeber a Kevin that is 7 or a Kevin at all

WOOOAAAHHH.
My mind is like so epic-ally stuffed.
LOVED the update:)
They have to get Kevin back. Like, seriously, who the fuck would kidnap a KID??
And what kind of name is Beatrix anyway? That's her name right? Psh, I'm too lazy to remember because she's a bitch.
Just sayin'
Anyway, update soon!! Or I will die from suspense-ia. Yeah it's a disease...but not really.
-Em:)

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!

Amazing I can't believe that she has a brother.

Woah a lot of things that are finally in the open.
Now we know why Beatrice had her father killed so he won't get in the way of her plans.
And now we need to find out why she is after Alex.
Man that is a lot to take in: Her father still alive, people that have special abilities and Alex having a half brother.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uh oh i think that somebody better get to explaining. hehehe. Sorry i had to. I really liked this chapter I cant believe that her father is alive.

Okay, I'm not sure if I've commented on this before, but either way: I love this story; it's so great :)
Anyway, Jack's alive :O Such a great twist.
Oh and that Brian/Cassie thing sounds like a good idea!
Can't wait to read more of this. Hope you update soon :)

I KNEW HE COULDN'T HAVE BEEN DEAD!
Agh! I wantto let u know
That you are an amazing author.

Whoa, holy crap!!
Jack probably initiated his death to find out about Beatrice doings or something
Maybe he knew thst his sister (can't remember if they were related that way) wanted everything for herself
I definitley didn't expect this now
Haha, totally loving Cassie's character :D
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

HOLY CRAP!
Her father is still alive!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????
Man a lot of things are happening left and right!
And I wonder why that woman is after Jack's daughter and who the hell is that Boy!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a twist.... I love it!!!

Aw, I'm so glad that Matt agreed for Alex to learn some of the stuff
They would all be better off if she knew some things
She wouldn't always be the damsel in distress
Hm, I wonder why they have to go to Vietnam now
I have the feeling that it's going to be a trap again
But maybe it isn't one
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)