um, so I'm in love with this story so much it's insane. Please update soon, seriously, love the plot and where you're going with it. It not some cheesy-predictable story, it's great!
Thanks for ommenting on my story, so I thought that I would check ours out. I am only on the first chapter but.... IT IS GREAT SO FAR! :) I think it is cool to do a thriller-is sort of story, so kudos to you! :) Well off to read some more.
Whoa, holy flip.... And person over me probably hasn't properly read the story if she can't remember Kevin >:3 So, Kevin is Alex half-brother? Hm, interesting.... Beatrice probably wants to take atvantage of his abilities or something And it now makes perfect sense why she wanted to kill Jack But now there's another question, why she was after Alex.... I really can't wait to see what's going to happen next Hope you update soon :)
WOOOAAAHHH. My mind is like so epic-ally stuffed. LOVED the update:) They have to get Kevin back. Like, seriously, who the fuck would kidnap a KID?? And what kind of name is Beatrix anyway? That's her name right? Psh, I'm too lazy to remember because she's a bitch. Just sayin' Anyway, update soon!! Or I will die from suspense-ia. Yeah it's a disease...but not really. -Em:)
Woah a lot of things that are finally in the open. Now we know why Beatrice had her father killed so he won't get in the way of her plans. And now we need to find out why she is after Alex. Man that is a lot to take in: Her father still alive, people that have special abilities and Alex having a half brother. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay, I'm not sure if I've commented on this before, but either way: I love this story; it's so great :) Anyway, Jack's alive :O Such a great twist. Oh and that Brian/Cassie thing sounds like a good idea! Can't wait to read more of this. Hope you update soon :)
Whoa, holy crap!! Jack probably initiated his death to find out about Beatrice doings or something Maybe he knew thst his sister (can't remember if they were related that way) wanted everything for herself I definitley didn't expect this now Haha, totally loving Cassie's character :D I'm really looking forward for more Hope you update soon :)
HOLY CRAP! Her father is still alive!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????? Man a lot of things are happening left and right! And I wonder why that woman is after Jack's daughter and who the hell is that Boy! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aw, I'm so glad that Matt agreed for Alex to learn some of the stuff They would all be better off if she knew some things She wouldn't always be the damsel in distress Hm, I wonder why they have to go to Vietnam now I have the feeling that it's going to be a trap again But maybe it isn't one I'm really looking forward for more Hope you update soon :)