It Wasn't Meant to Be Like This - Comments

Honestly? I didn't think it was rushed, if that makes you feel better xD

i like this chapter! It was a good beginning to the next part which I know will be great! :)
yay for a weekend away with Beth!!
I hope you update again soon because I cant wait! :)

Yay for the long way! :)

Beth needs to break up soon!! Poor Fin... hmm wonder what Beth is going to get him.
cant wait to read the next one! update soon!! :)

Beth is taking wayy to long in my opinion. xD Idk what should she get him?

aww I really love the ending in this one.
too cute!
update again soon! :)

Of course it got ruined.
Why wouldn't it get ruined?
lol.
Update again soon. :)

aww Fin and Beth are just too cute.
too bad it was ruined at the end.
update again soon!!! :)
keep up the amazing work! <3

FINALLY BETH! far out, took you a while

Wow! Are they brave or just plain stupid?
They kissed knowing Jack was in the apartment.
What if he had to go take a piss and saw them.
Yep. They are definitely idiots.
Great update though! :)
Keep up the good work.

love this chapter!! Fin is just too sweet.
cannot wait for another update!!

I've been addicted to this story. It's amazing! Please write more =)
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It's official Finn has issues.
Great update though. :)

I loved the fighting sceen and the whole story is amazing!! Maggie is one of my favortie charatures

love this chapter!! :)
poor maggie though... and I liked how worried beth was.
Fin is just awesome. I love this guy.
cannot wait for another chapter!!
keep up the amazing work!

i actually LOVE your story minus the minor grammatical and spelling mistakes.
I love how you have the ability to engage your readers and twist their moods in any way you want to, and i do admit that i cried a tad when Finn was taking case me April.
Big ups to you and please update soon:)

That's understandable about about the Paul story.
This one was great though. :)

this is going to be good. haha can't wait to read more!!
keep up the amazing work!

as for the paul story, maybe you should do something with paul taking care of ruby or maybe a time jump?? just a thought. i know writers block is not a fun thing to have.

alright.
i'm convinced.
i still don't like jack. :p

so glad they talked and are friends again.
simply cannot wait for more!! :)