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  • lions

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    I really liked this! I enjoyed how straight-forward it was but at the same time I think it could have used a little more detail and like, padding. Overall though, the layout was great and it flowed nicely. Excellent story (:
    December 29th, 2010 at 03:28am
  • HarryPotterGenration

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    wow i feel sorry for u on that one.
    November 20th, 2010 at 06:00pm
  • Parfaitavectoi

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    It was really good and I don't think I found mistakes, but I'm terrible at finding them.
    November 13th, 2010 at 11:25pm
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