Fukin hell, this story is some shade of brilliant. Your girl seems rather intelligent, and she has some actual character, which is super appreciated. If you've got a destination in mind on it, I'd love to see some more!
Oh my gosh, for a second I got so nervous because I thought she was gonna let those hoes up and then everyone would be all ~angry~ with her. I'm glad she handled herself well though! That's certainly a good sign :) Loved it!<3
I kind of really like (oh what a contradiction that phrase was) the fact you haven't given us any real indication of what's going to happen yet. Because that just really makes me want to keep reading to find out. And normally that would piss me off, but because you write so well it makes it very enjoyable :)
Afgdghhfddhjugrszvvji I MISSED YOUR WRITING AND YESI REALLY AM GONNA TELLYOU THIS ERRY UPDATE WHATEVER. THIS IS BEAUTIFUL DEAR. I LOVE PENNY AND YOU AND, YUP. I WANT MORE.
I really like this story!!! You even have the accents down pretty well! although I do sometimes get lost...Sorry! Just wanted to throw that out there! Either way super excited to see where this goes =]
Ack! I am so glad that I was looking for something to read and somehow I stumbled across your page! I am so excited for this to pick up. But when am I not excited to read something of yours?!
I pretty much adore this so far. One because it's one of the very few well written Oliver stories I've read on this site and two because I have no idea what to expect!