Very inresting. (I wonder what happens next.) Like other comments say, in not so many words, your writing is very good.
February 22nd, 2011 at 03:19am
I am loving this story. As noted by another commentator, the script font makes it difficult to read. Perhaps paying more attention to spelling would help the reader, too. It is distracting to figure out spelling in a manuscript.
The story itself is riveting. The plot and pace are excellent. The characters are well described. The interactions between the siblings is believable. And, as a last remark, I love the humor.
Overall a wonderful story is developing.
