The Smiles That are Ever - Comments

Honestly, this comment isn't going to differ much from the other two you've gotten. This was really good. Really moving, too.

And, I'd hate to sound like a broken record, but it is really surprising that I'm only the third person that's commented on this.

But, yeah. It was great :)

(And sorry for taking so long with this. I should have the results up really soon. Either tonight, or within the next couple days.)

Thanks for entering!

I have to agree with Jackasaurus Rex, it's surprising that this doesn't have more attention than it does. First off, I love the song you chose. My Chem is an amazing band and that song is one of my favorites. Your writing is flawless and I love how well this flowed together. Brilliant!

Wow. I'm really surprised this hasn't gotten more attention and comments. Number one, I really like that song. Number two, this was so moving. It left enough to the imagination that someone could place themselves or someone they know in the story and feel it even more deeply. This was a lovely, tragic piece. The last line was my favorite and it was the perfect conclusion. Amazing!