The Girl in That Song - Comments

Okay seeing someone three times in the same day either means 1) he needs to get out more or 2) it's fate ;) Personally I like to think it's the latter

My, my, Kendall's the love doctor (well who else would it be, everyone else is temporarily out of the picture)

The line of ipods were cute. Very cute indeed

Whenever I'm at my Aunt's house I watch Big Time Rush, partially for the guys but the other half to hear them sing. The plots of the tv show is always a little corny but the guys make it worth it ;) Carlos is definitely a sweetheart and his dad always makes me laugh

woo for happy endings and with one of my favorite songs xD

The flow of this story, for the most part, is really good. I didn't see any grammatical errors so my help is very limited >.< As for improvement I'm not really sure. I feel as if you change something in this, no matter how small, it would either seem like too much or that it would deduct from the rest of the story. In my opinion, with that being said: don't change anything

Awww.
I love this because I know EXACTLY where Carlos is coming from.
Your writing style's addicting - once you start, you can't stop reading.
Anyways, this has to be a favorite of mine just because I can relate to it so well. <3

I can't even begin to explain how much I love this.
Carlos has this special place in my heart... don't tell Logan, but it's true, and I can't deny it.
This story was so sweet, and adorable, and I swear, I "awe"ed like seventeen times.
Simply amazing... your writing is so darn...catchy, I guess you could say. It really pulls a person in, makes them want to read straight through, so pauses, no interruptions.
<3

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!
I literally read this three times, I love it that much!

After a slightly stressful show at school, this was definitely an uplifting story to read!

I was listening to the song as I was reading and I could actually find the very subtly hidden lyrics in the story so kudos to you on that! I can't do that to save my life!

Thank you so much for this, it's amazing! :) <3
Glad I could help with the funk!

Loved the concept and that it's about Carlos.
:3