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Just Another Teenage-Barakat? - Comments
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i love this story so far but should jack really run and jump on top of a pregnant girl? :sSeptember 1st, 2012 at 07:00pm
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i think i shall like this story even though i only read the first chappy btw whether it was intended or not i found it funny that she said her ALL TIME favorite was All Time Low yes i know that makes me sound like i make corny jokes all the time which i dont but i just thought it was kinda funny just sayin:)August 26th, 2011 at 08:05pm
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awesome story!!! can't wait for the sequelJune 18th, 2011 at 03:16am
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gah.. i finished... im sad now.. .BUT IT WAS SO AWESOME AND GOOD AND EEEEEEEEKK :D :D :D it was truly an amazing story :DJune 12th, 2011 at 11:15pm
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eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek jack and pete....heeh... god i love this story :D :D :DJune 12th, 2011 at 10:34pm
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MUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH THEY FINALLY KISSED HAHA score. -nod-... :3 -clicks back to reading.-June 12th, 2011 at 10:19pm
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BARAKITTYYY!!!! omgomgomg sooo gooooood!!!!!! must continue reading ahhhhhhhhh :D :D :D :DJune 12th, 2011 at 10:02pm
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ahahahahahh "like the sister i never had!!" "You do have a sister" 'Oh yeah" hehehehehe you're an amazing writer. :3 hehehehehe.....-runs back to reading-June 12th, 2011 at 09:30pm
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ahahahahah you played jack perfectly in his chapter entrance i couldn't stop laughing at the "Alex and I aren't gay together" part. that was priceless! i love it so far -goes back to reading- :3June 12th, 2011 at 09:19pm
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loved this all the way through cant wait for what comes next!! :DJune 11th, 2011 at 01:23am
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love the ending :)June 10th, 2011 at 09:53pm
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OMFG..I just looked at the character page and i kno the girl in the picture 4 arianna...June 9th, 2011 at 06:08pm
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don't kill off arianna keep it following to the next sequal with her and AlexJune 9th, 2011 at 05:23am
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*sigh of relief* YAY!! They're happy :D and alive :)June 9th, 2011 at 03:20am
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good story i love it and thankful u didn't kill off Ari and the squeal should Follow Jasey with a little bit of the others mixed in...June 9th, 2011 at 03:00am
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That was good I'd like to read a sequeal about the little familyJune 9th, 2011 at 02:16am
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YAYYYYY love his chapter an the babies name is so adorable an that was a sweet thing to do I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter XD UPDATTTTEEEEEE!!!!!!!June 9th, 2011 at 01:26am
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i can't believe its so close to being over!June 9th, 2011 at 12:44am
I'm a bit bummed with the way it ended, though, on that sort of cliffhanger... I read what you have of the sequel, which wasn't much with just that one update. Since it wasn't continued, it was a bit confusing just reading the prologue.
However, I wanted to leave a comment maybe encouraging you to continue it, or perhaps write another installment following where this one left off... I think that would have been better suited, with the way it ended. Or just like another chapter to this one or something; maybe a one-shot type of sequel would suffice.
I just thought this was really good, and it was a bummer that it never got more of a conclusive ending. Some stories, it's okay to do that with, but I feel like this one it was a little too open-ended.
But yeah, I just wanted to leave feedback to let you know that I will be here if you do choose to write for it again, or the sequel to it. Even though it's been a few years, I have faith you could write for it again.
But if not, I understand, I at the least just wanted to leave feedback letting you know I think you're a great writer and did a great job with what you had of this. I really enjoyed it. :)