Zero Order Phase - Comments

Haha, I read to highlight the text because my vision is really screwing up on me. ;) I can't read red font or any font on a black background. I'm going blind, haha! So yeah, it took me a while to find this story, I'm mostly not really on here much. :/ But, it was very well written and cute. :) I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

OMG THAT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME. When I got to the summary page, I noticed you had a sparkly, flashing picture... I thought I was high but then I remembered I don't take drugs (and that's super cereal).