March 5th, 2012 at 05:11am
Lost in Darkness - Comments
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It's a shame this was only a Two Shot. This would've made one hell of a story(:August 28th, 2011 at 10:06am
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where did you find this pic of Syn? its awesomeFebruary 28th, 2011 at 02:26am
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Only two chapters? There is going to be more, right..?January 20th, 2011 at 10:42pm
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lovedDecember 22nd, 2010 at 06:17am
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So yeah SEQUEL!!!!!!! :)*December 3rd, 2010 at 02:10am
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I love this. I really think you should continue with it. I'd love to see how these two get to know each other and learn to "be with each other". Plus I'm sure the sex between them would be flippin fantabulous...but that's just me and my imagination running wild again ;) lol. But seriously, please consider continuing this. It's really awesome and has SO much potential! xoxoxoNovember 29th, 2010 at 01:27am
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This was awesome Brian chopped Mark's head off hehehe :)November 26th, 2010 at 02:20am
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Amazing chapter..I'm glad that Brian was able to rescue her in time and kill Mark too :DNovember 25th, 2010 at 08:59pm
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O.O
This story is AMAZING!
It had an amazing plot and everything!November 25th, 2010 at 03:57pm -
So, I've been reading all your stories tonight and I am like dude these are awesome, I especially like this last one, you should write a sequel haha really gopod ^^November 25th, 2010 at 07:10am
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That can't be the end. There has to be a sequel there has tooooooo be please!!! I love your stories and this just worked it's way up to the top of the pile :)*November 25th, 2010 at 07:09am
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Interesting!November 25th, 2010 at 06:46am
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awe, i can't believe there's no more! i really loved it! <3November 25th, 2010 at 04:56am
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Hahaha I loved it!!!!:)November 25th, 2010 at 03:46am
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NO NO NO NO NO! MORE! MAKE MORE! This NEEDS to be a story. PLEASE think on it, please please please.November 25th, 2010 at 03:43am
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That's it?
Awe poop, i was hoping this would be a longer story
You should totally turn it into one though
I would love to read it
<3 MicheleNovember 25th, 2010 at 03:19am -
It's really cool so far.November 23rd, 2010 at 03:51am
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I love it.... :)November 21st, 2010 at 04:10am
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Oh my god, this is so amazing! It is exactly what I wanted... holy fuck. I love how dark and possessive Brian is, and your writing is really incredible. I'm really looking forward to hearing about why everyone's after her, and I swear to god, Brian better get her back with a damn vengeance. I can just tell that it's going to be jaw-dropping.
And thank you for making it a two-shot. A lot of people that run contests make their one shot prizes really short, but you really don't cheat anyone. It's great, and I really appreciate it. I'm looking forward to reading more xDNovember 16th, 2010 at 08:53am
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