Almost Whole - Comments

so clever aha, no joke.
I really liked this(:
sorry for such a random comment xD

You are clever.
I'm really glad she didn't jump (because you seem to like killing people) but I'm really sad that she's hurting so much because it's not her fault at all. And the idea of having a kitten and a puppy made me grin

This was good :) I like that you explained Ever's life, and how it's changed, but she still has those hurt feelings, welling up inside her. But that she knows she can overcome them.
I liked it, good job :D