Ocean Eyes - Comments

awww thier honey moon.... and poor matt :(
looooooved this1!!

The ending made me sad. I want to know what's wrong with poor Mattie, and even though you have already shared with me where this story is going to lead to in the sequel, it makes me very, very sad. I keep thinking after I read this last bit, "he's lost weight. That's usually a sign. Matt, go to the doctor!" Because maybe if he'd gone to the doctor, it wouldn't turn out the way it's going to and... And then I remember this is all fiction and that Matt's really alive and well and then I sigh a big breath of relief. And that's how your story makes me feel. It's so emotional; it pulls you in so deep, that you forget that it's fiction. You forget it's not real, and you think it's nonfiction and it's just...there's no words. I'm crying now as I type this and it's been a good two hours since I read the update. An excellent ending to a beautiful, heartwarming and heartwrenching story. I cannot wait for the sequel.

Loved it!
Well except for the whole loosing wait thing :/
<3 Michele

aww sooo sad :(
but i looved it1!!

I teared up a littlee

Dasha, I don’t even know what to say about this chapter. It was just so…emotional. It was so heartfelt, and it pulled at the strings in my heart and I will admit, I was bawling my eyes out. I just felt overwhelmingly sad when I was reading it, but at the same time, I was absolutely amazed at how well-written this chapter was, and how much I could connect to it. The way you pull the audience in every time you make an update…it’s just phenomenal. It’s like I can feel absolutely everything that Matt and Olivia are feeling. From the highs to the lows, and it’s just…amazing. I can’t say that enough, and it’s a talent that you have that I absolutely love seeing.

I also love seeing the fact that this story is different. I’ve never seen something like this on Mibba, and it’s amazing. Olivia is such a strong person, but at the same time, she isn’t afraid to show her feelings to Matt. She’s not afraid to let him in. And Matt, he’s so open to his feelings, and even though it’s crazy how him and Olivia met, he’s not afraid to let her in and see where the possibility of love could lead them. It’s why they’re perfect for one another, and it’s why it’s an absolutely beautiful story that I’m so in love with.

I cannot wait to see the last chapter, and then the sequel after that. I know what’s coming, kind of, because of our talks, but that doesn’t change the fact that I’m looking forward to seeing what you do with the story. It’s going to be heartbreaking and heartwarming all at the same time, and that’s truly why this is such an amazing story. Keep up the good work, Dasha! I can’t wait to see what else you write in this journey of Matt and Olivia’s.

awesome update!!
The beginning reminded me a lot of P.S. I love you
which made me want to cry even harder
<3 Michele

Such an amazing update, Dasha. I love the way that the characters are progressing, and the romantic, but not cheesy feel of it. This story is so different from anything else that I've ever read, and even though I know there's something sad coming up, I love what you write. It's amazing, and it just moves me. The character depth is phenomenal, and the word choicee you use always makes me smile. It's perfect, and I can't wait to see more.

Awe I loved this update
It was loaded with fluff and i love fluff
haha
<3 Michele

THIS IS INTERESTING :p
AND I LOOVE HER BIKE!!!
...oops the caps were on lol
sorry :P

THIS IS INTERESTING :p
AND I LOOVE HER BIKE!!!
...oops the caps were on lol
sorry :P

awesome awesome update
i love the idea of her opening a Toy store
<3 Michele

that was another cute chapter. I am glad that she is going with Matt.

aww this was a cute chapter.

Awe i loved this update!
I hope this means good things for the two of them
<3 Michele

Dasha, you've done it again. You never cease to amaze me with your amazingness. The wording and the emotion and...everything. It's all amazing. I feel like I'm there in that hotel room with them, like a fly on the wall watching everything they're doing. I want a bowl of popcorn and a soda so I can watch this on TV, dammit. It's so awesome. I love this story so much, and it keeps me pulled in. I keep thinking, "what's she gonna do next?" And then when I think I have it figured out, there's an amazing curve ball and I just love it. Though the update didn't go to my email this time, I'm glad you told me about the new update, or I would have missed out on one hell of an update for a few hours. Can't wait t osee what you do next, Dasha. I'm sure it'll be no less than spectacular.

This is amazing so far I can't wait for more.

I loved Both of the updates!!!!!
Seatle is one of the places i would love to go to, if i ever get to travel so i loved the idea of writing this chapter from the observation deck
<3 Michele

This was a really awesome update, Dasha. I love how she asked him flat out why he kissed her, and his quirky response. It brings them closer, and the tension between them is good, but very palpable. I also like how she looks back on her life back in Chicago and how she compares Clyde and Matt. It makes a lot of sense to me, and it just makes me feel as if I know her better. I think the whole tourist-y thing is kind of cool, too. It's a way to bring them closer, and then when he said, 'when we go back to California,' it was just a really awesome moment in the story. I was so pumped to see this update in my email. I can't wait until the next update. It's amazing, and your writing makes me envious.

That beginning almost brought tears to my eyes
=[ but it end quite nicely!
<3 Michele