@ vampireangel216 Thanks so much. I've actually been thinking of finding a co-author for the re-write. I want to try and separate the characters a little more, having someone else write one of the parts would make it a lot easier for that.
Dude, how does this story not have a shit load of comments? Still, love it! But now it seems kinda boring...... But I'm glad that Mercy is happy again! :D
Finally some change up in the sex scene in chapter 17. By the way, you do realize that it's supposed to be "Solaire and I" instead of "Me and Solaire" but for some reason I don't Sol now...My best friend recently betrayed me as well at a competition where we were partners but quit on my in the middle of it without telling me. For some reason, all of our friends sided with me as well and left him fighting on his own. What was Sol's reason for leaving Mercy? Plus, I'm a bit wary as to how Sol knows all those new techniques...
Wooa! I just finished all 17 chapters in like a hour and a half! And I'm proud to say I LOVED IT! I'm sooo excited to find out why Sol flipped the pancake! He was crazy! Lol
YAY, so glad they got together, reading happy endings gives me hope that someday i'll find a guy who truly cares about me! can't wait to read the last few chapters or so :)