I liked it a lot but there were a few things I wish you would have told more about. The main question on my mind is how did he find out his wife was cheating with his best friend?
My favorite parts were the way you explained what year it was and the ending. I thought that using Green Day, clothing, and Saving Private Ryan was a very clever idea and it was much more interesting than just giving a year. And the ending fit so well because of how you worded it!
My favorite parts were the way you explained what year it was and the ending. I thought that using Green Day, clothing, and Saving Private Ryan was a very clever idea and it was much more interesting than just giving a year. And the ending fit so well because of how you worded it!