Burning - Comments

Good Lord, girl! You have an insane amount of drabbles! But even so, they're all very good and amazingly written. Like silk tea. said, I love the image that it's based on. This is so gorgeously written. It keeps you thinking even after you've left the page. I love the repetition at the end; sometimes, when authors repeat themselves, it seems stupid, but you made it so darn professional-sounding. :] Amazing job!

This was written fantastically. I love the image it's based on. The repetition of burning really made it for me. It all flowed into one big piece of beauty. I'm very impressed with what you have written here. I'm curious as to what exactly caused her to lose her emotion...it would be interesting to see a continuation of this, perhaps in another drabble...just to clear some things up.