Running From Lions - Comments

I love Alex Gaskarth and I love this story just as much! :D

I'm not a huge fan of All Time Low, but I found this to be an interesting read all the same. You've done an excellent job capturing the character's emotions—her confusion and heartbreak and longing seem very real and intense. However, I thought the climax was a bit of a let down. It seemed very rushed. A bit more description and dialogue and padding would've went a long way in this case. You might also want to double check your grammar because I found quite a few mistakes; especially, concerning the placement of commas. Luckily, the mistakes were minor and not overtly distracting.

Overall, I'd say the story was quite good. It makes for a nice, short read, and only leaves the reader a little dissatisfied. If you took the time to polish it up a little more, I'd say without a doubt this story has the potential to be really fantastic.

i looooove this!xx

that was so beautiful<3 i was crying through the middle very nicely done <3

this is awesome :)

tumblr brought me here.
this is prettyful. <333333

Heartfelt <3

love all the songs in it, so well written! xxxxxxx

Loved it.
Very well written, and it didn't hurt that i'm a huge All Time Low fan.
Needed more Alex in it, and a little more build up, I think, but it was really cute. :)
Will you be writing more?

Beautiful. Such a lovely writer :D

not bad.(: loves the songs and all time low. nice job.