Holy shit, I think you have got to be the coolest commenter, for sending me the longest and most wonderful comment I've recieved :D Thanks so much and I shall defo look into a possible two-shot ; )
May 10th, 2011 at 10:10pm
OMG I feel like crying my eyes right now!
I mean Hope gets raped in front of her boyfriend and then the after math just caused Hope to fade even more.
Both of them are not to blame, they didn't know that that was going to happen to them.
I know Hope doesn't blame Zacky at all but I am glad that she finally said something.
And I know the guilt is literally tearing him apart, he absolutely had no reason to push Hope away.
Drinking until he passed out, fucking whores and ignoring his girlfriend all together.
I am glad that Val said the things to him but he just let it go in one ear and out the other.
Maybe if for once, Zacky actually talked to hisgirlfriend Hope, she wouldn't have done what she has done.
You should definitely consider making this wonderful oneshot into a full length story or make a sequel, I am a sucker for happy ending that involve stories like this.
Wonderfully written!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
