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  • CraigMabbitt

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    Wow I fail. That commented twice >.<
    December 14th, 2011 at 07:31pm
  • CraigMabbitt

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    Omgggggggggggggggg
    I wanna cry cuz its over D'8
    Even tho I only jus started readin these the past few days, I feel so attached
    DDDDDD''''''''''x
    Gotta go read the sequel now 8'((((
    I loved this and the prequel SOOOO much bby.
    So so much.
    All the drama in their lives, I'm so glad its over.
    They can finally be happy 8'D
    SHE SAID YES!!!!
    I loved this sooooo much and I can't wait to read about their happiness
    Its gonna be amazing cuz you're an amazing writer
    I love youuuu <333
    December 14th, 2011 at 07:30pm
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    Omgggggggggggggggg
    I wanna cry cuz its over D'8
    Even tho I only jus started readin these the past few days, I feel so attached
    DDDDDD''''''''''x
    Gotta go read the sequel now 8'((((
    I loved this and the prequel SOOOO much bby.
    So so much.
    All the drama in their lives, I'm so glad its over.
    They can finally be happy 8'D
    SHE SAID YES!!!!
    I loved this sooooo much and I can't wait to read about their happiness
    Its gonna be amazing cuz you're an amazing writer
    I love youuuu <333
    December 14th, 2011 at 07:29pm
  • CraigMabbitt

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    I should have been reading this the whole time you were writing it and telling me about it and showing me previews.
    ADFGHJKL
    Cuz I love it so far.
    Of course, cuz you're the best writer ever <3
    Anywhoreee, back to reading 8)
    December 13th, 2011 at 09:13pm
  • november_rain

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    i fail so hard. -.-

    freakin' bb codes...-.-

    IM STILL GONNA MISS THIS STORY D8

    Molz
    November 17th, 2011 at 07:28am
  • november_rain

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    wow...

    it'd figure i'd be gettin all emotional over the end of this story 8( IMA MISS IT SO MUCH! but yes, i agree, jewels and ronnie do indeed deserve their happy ending <3

    i love the way you ended it; i think it's definitely something that hasn't been done before and it was so...idunno...well you wouldn't expect smut to be moving/touching/meaningful in the way that the word(s) usually is[are] defined, yet you did it. i loved it.

    gotta love sandra, gettin her booty outta there, sly wink and all xD she seems so sweet - and awesome. the way juliet told ronnie she was accepting the proposal just darn near killed me...8') "I-I...Really?!" = CUTEST THING EVERRRR. xD SERIOUSLY. that was so adorable, i just about puked rainbows all over my desk [which, yes i am at my desk though i just told you i havent read either chapter yet >.> i'm evil <.<]

    this story has been here since before you and i became best friends. and i remember, after you started commenting yrletf like a maniac, me going into your stories and checking you out. first, i read Fade to Black, and then wakeup. ive been inlove with the story ever since. although..it really is too bad juliet found herself gettin closer to scout in kit's absence... im sure kit hated every minute of that

    im so happy i was there to do the countdown to submitting yi-hib's final chapter with you. i know how much your babies mean to you and i think that was just...epicly raddishly awesomesauce..

    gah..IM GOING TO MISS THIS SO MUCH...8( ima hafta keep commenting this even after its locked up o_o

    i love this story and its predecessor so much, i just cant get over this D8 THANK THE LORD THEIR TROUBLES ARE OVER.

    ..................but knowing you, theyre far from it -.-

    love you, bestieFIRlifeee <333

    this story has been amazing alllllll the way through <3

    Molz**
    November 17th, 2011 at 07:26am
  • november_rain

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    wow...

    it'd figure i'd be gettin all emotional over the end of this story 8( IMA MISS IT SO MUCH! but yes, i agree, jewels and ronnie do indeed deserve their happy ending <3

    i love the way you ended it; i think it's definitely something that hasn't been done before and it was so...idunno...well you wouldn't expect smut to be moving/touching/meaningful in the way that the word usually is[are] defined, yet you did it. i loved it.

    gotta love sandra, gettin her booty outta there, sly wink and all xD she seems so sweet - and awesome. the way juliet told ronnie she was accepting the proposal just darn near killed me...8') "I-I...Really?!" = CUTEST THING EVERRRR. xD SERIOUSLY. that was so adorable, i just about puked rainbows all over my desk [which, yes i am at my desk though i just told you i havent read either chapter yet >.> i'm evil <.<]

    this story has been here since before you and i became best friends. and i remember, after you started commenting yrletf like a maniac, me going into your stories and checking you out. first, i read Fade to Black, and then wakeup. ive been inlove with the story ever since. although..it really is too bad juliet found herself gettin closer to scout in kit's absence... im sure kit hated every minute of that

    im so happy i was there to do the countdown to submitting yi-hib's final chapter with you. i know how much your babies mean to you and i think that was just...epicly raddishly awesomesauce..

    gah..IM GOING TO MISS THIS SO MUCH...8( ima hafta keep commenting this even after its locked up o_o

    i love this story and its predecessor so much, i just cant get over this D8 THANK THE LORD THEIR TROUBLES ARE OVER.

    ..................but knowing you, theyre far from it -.-

    love you, bestieFIRlifeee <333

    this story has been amazing alllllll the way through <3

    Molz
    November 17th, 2011 at 07:25am
  • hachie

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    YAY!
    Juliet said yes and now they are finally together!
    I really thought Ronnie stuttering was freaking adorable!
    He was extremely nervous when he asked permission to remove Juliet's clothes.
    As I am sad that this story has come to an end, I am also happy that Ronnie and Juliet are finally together.
    They both went through so many hardships and heart breaks to realize that they belong with each other.
    I am about to read the first chapter sequel now!
    This is an amazing story and I can't wait for future ones!
    November 17th, 2011 at 04:54am
  • futterwacken

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    Eek! Amazing. Going on the sequel now. :D
    November 17th, 2011 at 04:14am
  • november_rain

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    YOU.

    DIRTY.

    SLUTMUFFIN. 

    Seriously? Just end it there like that? -__- that was not cool, señorita. I mean, we may know what she's going to tell him but HE doesn't and the hopelessness is just sad 8( Juliet better hurry and tell him O_O I LOVE that Ronnie told the whore to screw off :3 and how theyfound out. I also quite adore the adorable moment that Juliet has, staring down a the ring and thinking of the man of her dreams 8)) iz so happy for her. She truly deserves it. Sandra is funny and seems like a definitely crazy fun person, it's too bad she's gotta move out >.> I entertain the thought all the time that ronni and Juliet are someday going to knock on your door and start bashing you in the head with PVC pipes, then have the hulk pop your head back out, then bash you again, then turn to me and knock me in the head with em for helping you/supporting your evilness, then disappear back to fanfiction world x) WE PUT OUR CHARACTERS THROUGH SO MUCH HE'LL IT AIN'T EVEN FUNNEH

    UPDATE THIS! NAO! O_O_O_O

    Ily bestieFIRlifeeee <333

    Molz
    November 12th, 2011 at 09:49pm
  • Haysay

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    yay, she is finally going through with it, can't wait to see the next chapter :)
    November 6th, 2011 at 03:29pm
  • hachie

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    YAY!
    She has decided to marry Ronnie because she loves home more than ever!
    But before she tells him yes, they should talk first and just let things out before the big YES!
    Ronnie is really depressed since he believes that Juliet will say no to him but he is wrong!
    And you already got the sequel's link up!
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    November 6th, 2011 at 09:07am
  • carlaangel86

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    Aww she said yes!! Or she will say yes!! Love it!
    November 6th, 2011 at 03:05am
  • colour-me-blind

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    Yay, she's gonna say yes :3
    I can't wait to see Ronnie's reaction, haha, or well read his reaction.
    November 6th, 2011 at 02:48am
  • Haysay

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    What is sh going to do next?!?! AHH Update soon :)
    November 5th, 2011 at 02:27pm
  • hachie

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    So Ronnie hasn't been in contact with Lexus since he told her to fuck off at the club.
    Well at least Juliet knows that Ronnie really wants to be with her though she has her doubts.
    But I believe she is going say yes because they both can't function without each other no matter stubborn they both are!
    Scout is really a great friend!
    Finding out if Ronnie is being true to his words and giving Juliet some advice!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    November 5th, 2011 at 06:41am
  • teamRadke

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    I absolutely love this story! You are an amazing writer, can't wait for your update! <3
    November 1st, 2011 at 01:31am
  • november_rain

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    Ksbdoqndkfebak......kwngkamelslqoenfkaqlfn!.......UDNSLQNDOKEPRBFKANCKRNFLQNDKFITKTHXUWJFLCNAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    YOU HOEBAG! YOU CAN'T STOP IT THERE!! DDDDDD'8 

    Fkelwnflwmsfkqlejb! o_______________X

    This story, as it has been since the very first time I read wake up, has been incredible. The reality and raw quality to every emotion; the thickening plot and the way every character and situation is tied back at some later date; this story is just amazing. I sound like a MAJOR kissarse at the moment but I dun really care because I'm FREAKIN THE HELL OUT over the way you just ended that chapter..O___x HE PROPOSES, THEN HE JUST LEAVES?! WTF?! 8((( NUHHHHHHHH. jewels better get her bum up and run after heem! Dx poor Ronnie 8((( good lord. HE NEEDS A SHOWER BTW. and o______O is scout really related at all to the Halloween movies or did you just write that into the story cuz you could? O____o lol I know who Michael myers is nao xD and LOL Jacky. That's hilarious. 'oh dear god no! x.x' x'D so rad, dude lolol. SO WHUT HAPPENS NOW?!?!

    I NEED TO KNOOWWW. update O_O update O_O oh and before I forget, UPDATE! O_O

    ily bestieFIRlifeeee <333

    Molz 

    you know I would wait forever, yes I would wait...
    October 29th, 2011 at 09:25pm
  • november_rain

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    Ksbdoqndkfebak......kwngkamelslqoenfkaqlfn!.......UDNSLQNDOKEPRBFKANCKRNFLQNDKFITKTHXUWJFLCNAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    YOU HOEBAG! YOU CAN'T STOP IT THERE!! DDDDDD'8

    Fkelwnflwmsfkqlejb! o_______________X

    This story, as it has been since the very first time I read wake up, has been incredible. The reality and raw quality to every emotion; the thickening plot and the way every character and wert situation is tied back at some later date; this story is just amazing. I sound like a MAJOR kissarse at the moment but I dun really care because I'm FREAKIN THE HELL OUT over the way you just ended that chapter..O___x HE PROPOSES, THEN HE JUST LEAVES?! WTF?! 8((( NUHHHHHHHH. jewels better get her bum up and run after heem
    October 29th, 2011 at 08:23pm
  • colour-me-blind

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    Aww :3 That was adorable and sad though.
    And three more chapters :(
    But this story is so good!
    October 29th, 2011 at 05:08am