Vampires are not my favorite topic and I hate Vampire Diaries, but your story is terrific so far! You described Damon very well in the story description. Wow. The whole eye squint-head tilt thing was really good. I've only watched a few episodes, but you described him perfectly.
I wanted to read your story because my brother has been an extra on Vampire Diaries several times and has worked with Ian Somerhalder, Paul Wesley and Candice Accola. I've met Candice's uncle and from my brother's experience and her uncle she seems to be a very lovely and kind girl. But Mr. Somerhalder has quite a bit of attitude from everything I've heard. And a quick temper. ;)
Your story is great and I am gonna sub. Please visit my page and read some of my stuff.
This is epically amazing so far. You're a VERY good writer, something that's a bit rare on here nowadays. Lol. I enjoy how you're very good with grammar and sentence structure and especially how you're very good at conveying exactly how Ava is feeling, the panic, the confusion. Amazing, amazing job! I'm subscribing for sure.
oooooulala. a story about damon. :) i like where this is going. try not to have him too absent before you bring him out officially, it helps keep the interest in the story alive. :)
xD Awesome, especially for a fanfic.