I liked your story, it was different, but good, but the parents thing came along a little bit too quickly... just slow down the pace. Other than that, it was good.
January 11th, 2008 at 10:39pm
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I liked your story, it was different, but good, but the parents thing came along a little bit too quickly... just slow down the pace. Other than that, it was good.