I Need You Always - Comments

I thought this was cute and that the attention to detail allowed for a physical picture to be portrayed and it was a little difficult to decipher their emotions because they we're so straight forward. The actual mention of tears did help though to show that Emma was upset with the realization that her relationship with Zach wasn't the same.

I thought that it was good that you spaced out the story's time line a little so that there was more realism about it.

Best of luck and thank you for your submission!

I liked it. It was cute, Emma and Zach were cute together. I thought that the story was well paced and it had a lot of description. Although there wasn't a lot of emotion between them, like not a lot of emotion was described. It was hard to get a sense of what they were feeling. If it wasn't for Emma crying, it would have been hard to tell what she was feeling.

All together, I thought it was well done and they were cute together. If you don't get anything that I just said, feel free to message me. Thank you for submitting your story in!

This so cute! I really liked it. :) Good job and good luck!

Loved this one!
Great job!

This was very sweet Chelle.
I'm a sucker for a happy ending.
I'm a sucker for Zach Parise too.
Maybe I'm just a sucker - I dunno.
Good luck with the contest.

Yay I get the first comment!!!
I liked it, it was very well written and very cute.