The Witching Hour - Comments

wait i take back what i said about the layout the page was configued wrong sorry
-Marie

This is really good. However, I'm having trouble reading because of the layout and font color. Also you occasionally switch tenses so work on that
But this is really good. The first paragraph was enough to make me like it
-Marie

I love this story! I like the font personally but I generally like bigger font.(comment on AlexisKristine's comment) :/ Anyways, please continue.

I like this story and I'm interested in the plot, but do you think you can make the font smaller? It's like ridiculous big! Lol.

Anyways, keep it up and post more please! (:

^^I think the dress is from Leo(:
Can't wait for the next chapter!

This is great - so there's sort of a battle going on for her soul? Love the email bit - am guessing that's from one of the bad guys!?

Can't wait for the next chapter(:

This just keeps getting better! I love the way you drop little bits of 'mmm, wonder what's going on there?' in it - like why can't Thora remember her day out? I want to know what Luna tells Kala - please don't take too long!!!!!!!

Am loving this! You're so good at keeping the suspense - I want to know what the thing is that her mum and sister are concerned about. And Leo is a likeable character, too. Well done - more please!

I love this. The story itself is amazing, but your descriptions are almost more amazing.
I'm subscribing, so.. update soon :3

its really good cant wait till the next chapter =X good descriptions and details too

This is excellent! I love your description - it adds to the atmosphere without detracting from the story. Am looking forward to your next chapter.